[Rose Annaliese Fallen] [Lone Wolf]

Hey, just wanted to tell you that you should put up a WIP (work in progress) in the title so we know that you're still working on it.

Hey Min! I finished my profile for my character Rose Annaliese Fallen

I think it's alright. I'll have to check with that ability but otherwise, it's good. ^^

Thanks Min! I just need help with the pic. im so bad with that. lol. idk why. sorry.

It's perfectly alright. Technology tends to backfire every once in a while.

Oh I just realised this Jemma, but Heaven's tear isn't a valid faction. If you'd like, you could ask for it to be created. And if you wanted, I could help you. But until then, you'll have to choose another one.

I've reformatted your profile and left blank spaecs everywhere you need to fix something.

Faction, Title/Rank and First Form: You need to hoose your faction and all these depend on that choice.

Birthplace: By birthplace, it refers to the continent (Helios, Zilios, Talios)

Face Claim: We'll need an image of your character and the face claim when you manage to get it on here.

Equipment: Could you please add details about these things? You could add things like what they're used for or where you got them.

Personality: Could you maybe add more? Maybe add something like how she is when with friends or how she is alone?

Ability: I haven't left this blank but the thing is that since your race is fallen, so you already have a little bit of healing power. So your ability might be a little redundant.

If you do, however, choose to keep it, you say: "ability to turn it into taking any kind of pain or injury..." You never mentioned what it turns into. Plus healing any wound is a little OP. You'd have to make it heal wounds or something, which is the same thing as a fallen's ability.

Pets: You can only have 1 non-battle pet at the start so one of them's going to have to go, sorry. v.v

Talets/Skills: You need to have non-magial things in here. Healing isn't counted as non-magical so you don't need to include it in there.

So sorry for the inconvenience, Jemma. And post when you've edited.

Can I ask for Heaven's Tears to be created so I can keep it? I can't think of anything else to use. lol. Thanks Min!

Faction, Title/Rank and First Form: You need to hoose your faction and all these depend on that choice.

Birthplace: By birthplace, it refers to the continent (Helios, Zilios, Talios) - (Talios).

Face Claim: We'll need an image of your character and the face claim when you manage to get it on here. -( I still need help with this part please).

Equipment:
Could you please add details about these things? You could add things
like what they're used for or where you got them. (Pink teardrop pendent necklace, which lightens up when danger is near. Healing bottles - used for healing hurt and sick humans.)

Personality: Could you maybe add more? Maybe add something like how she is when with friends or how she is alone? - ( she is alone and hasnt seen her friends since she was a child. She left her village at age 16 because she felt being there wasnt making her happy after her family died when she was little. since then she is more quiet and keeps to herself but is still sweet.)

Ability:
I haven't left this blank but the thing is that since your race is
fallen, so you already have a little bit of healing power. So your
ability might be a little redundant.

If you do, however, choose
to keep it, you say: "ability to turn it into taking any kind of pain or
injury..." You never mentioned what it turns into. Plus healing any
wound is a little OP. You'd have to make it heal wounds or something,
which is the same thing as a fallen's ability. -(She would make it heal wounds and illnesses by saying the words, "Salina Iun Iasas.") - Keeping it pretty much. Just added the words that she would say to heal.

Pets: You can only have 1 non-battle pet at the start so one of them's going to have to go, sorry. v.v - (grey wolf named fang)

Talets/Skills:
You need to have non-magial things in here. Healing isn't counted as
non-magical so you don't need to include it in there. -(dancing, singing, writing.)

Alright. Seems about right. So just edit the things into your first post and then we'd have just a few things you need to add. ^^

We still need a faction or you could choose to become a Lone Wolf, so witout a faction. But you might want to read the rules for Lone Wolves, since they're special.

And the ability's still too powerful. You'd need to tone it down a bit since healing any wounds is pretty strong. Oh and don't forget, you can't be healed. So you might want to change it to something supportive, like enhancing something to make it faster or stronger. It's still your choice though.

Finally is the pic and FC. Is there a certain character you'd like? I could do it for you. Just tell me the name of the character and I'll find a pic for you. ^^

And we're almost done. o.o Don't forget to edit the changes in. ^^

~Basics~

Full Name:
Rose Annaliese Fallen

Nicknames(s):
Princess

Age:
23

Race:
Fallen

Birth place:
Talios

Faction:
Lone Wolf

Occupation:
Village Healer

Title/Rank:
Wise Healer
Ability:
(She sometimes senses/smell danger nearby before her necklace does.)

Hobbies/Pastime:
Enjoys dancing and being around nature. She hopes to regain her wings by sharing her healing abilities with the world and knowing she means something special. She continues to befriend villagers when asked for help.
Equipment: Could you please add details about these things? You could add things like what they're used for or where you got them. (Pink teardrop pendent necklace, which lightens up when danger is near. Healing bottles - used for healing hurt and sick humans.)
Talents/Skills: - dancing, singing, writing

~Background~

Family:
She had parents and a younger brother and sister. All four of them died from different illnesses, which Rose couldn't do anything about because she was only a child then. She now carries the burden of that day with her and has been feeling alone ever since but wants to make sure she can save others. She also doesn't know if anyone would take her under their wing of care like a second family.
Personality: ( she is alone and hasnt seen her friends since she was a child. She left her village at age 16 because she felt being there wasnt making her happy after her family died when she was little. since then she is more quiet and keeps to herself but is still sweet.)
Hometown:
Rivendell - A big village in Tailos. It is a beautiful place with many lakes, rivers, waterfall, forests nearby. Rose would always enjoy hiding in the forests when playing with the animals.

Back story:
Rose Annaliese Fallen grew up with a wonderful close family in Gethsemane and many of her close friends adored her because they felt she was a special girl. She didn't ask for a lot though, her family and friends were all she ever wanted to love and spend time with. At age 7, her parents and her siblings died suddenly of different illnesses and she was taken in by her grandfather to be raised, but by the time she was 16, she felt she couldn't remain in her village any longer. She decides to leave a note to her grandfather and has been out on her own ever since. At age 18, she finds out she has wings but looses them because of blaming herself for her family's death. She has lost her ability to talk to animals but still has bits of her healing ability within her. Now that she is 23, she befriends villagers and helps to heal them if needed but she feels inside she is more alone then ever.

~Physical~

Sex: Female
Height: 5'4
Weight: 118
Build: Skinny (Fit)
Skin: White
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Left/Right Handed: Right
How does s/he dress: Simple white dress, no shoes, hair down, she has nothing else to wear

Accessories:
The only thing she carries is a pink teardrop jeweled pendent necklace in a pouch her mother gave her as a child.

Mannerism/Pose/Movement:
She is sweet and quiet and keeps most things to herself

Voice:
She has a soft voice

~Emotional~

~What does this character think/feel about~
The opposite sex: She never had any guy friends or boyfriends
Politics: nothing
Religion: She prays to herself
Science: nothing
Drugs and alcohol: doesnt do them
Killing/Murder: doesnt do them
Life: lonely
Death: burden
Society: nothing
Personality: quiet, alone
State of the world: not sure
Their own Faction: sad

~Intellectual/Mental/Personality Attributes and Attitudes~

Secret desires: to be taken under someone's wing of care
How do they express themselves: talking quietly and looking at the ground
Most at ease when: thinking and healing others
Personality/Mental/Social Strengths: sweet and calm
Personality/Mental/Social Flaws: sweet and calm
Greatest Fear: being alone and not meaning something special
Phobias/Insecurities: being killed

~Likes and Dislikes~

Likes: healing and villagers
Dislikes: killers

~Favourite~
Colour: Pink and White
Clothing: White
Food/drinks: Water and sandwiches
Animal: wolves, deer, birds, butterflies


~Least Favorite ~
Colour: brown, yellow, orange
Clothing: pants
Food/drinks: plain bread
Animal: snakes
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Motto/Personal quote: "Better to give then take."
Most prized possession: her pink necklace from her mother


~Relationship~

Marital status: single
Loves: nature
First crush: none
Best Friends: none
Friends: childhood - about 4 or 5.
Hates : liars
Dislikes: liars
Rivals: none
Pets : 2 wolves from her home that followed her. one grey and one white. named breeze and fang.

~Powers~

Element: (Only 1 , If any) - none

~Personal Spells/Abilities~ - water. ability to turn it into taking any kind of pain or injury anyway from a human.

(These abilities are Unique to your character and have little to nothing to do with your faction. Be very detailed with these abilities and your are allowed a maximum of 3)

~Transformation/Form Skills~ - does not transform



~First Form Skills~

( Any special abilties that can be used in your first form. You may only start with 2 abilities attached to your first form unless otherwise stated by your faction. Again be detailed.)

~Other~

~Equipment~- healing bottles, water, pink necklace



~Pets~ - (grey wolf named Fang)



Face Claim: We'll need an image of your character and the face claim when you manage to get it on here. -( I still need help with this part please).








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[u]Face Claim: (Character Name - Anime/Game/Show its from)

Hi Min! I edited and add the changes into my profile and reposted it. I hope I didn't miss anything! =)

For my character's picture, can I use one of Lady Belldandy from the anime called Ah my Goddess? That would be great! Thanks for helping me with that! =)

I changed my fraction to Lone Wolf and joined the group for it too!

Alright. ^^ Well, you weren't supposed to make a new post, just edit your very first one. But don't worry, it happens. ^^

Oh Belldandy! I've read the manga! Nice choice. ^^

Ok, well, could you explain a bit more about your ability? Oh and I'm not sure but you might have to talk to Zekaire about this since he has to approve Lone Wolf abilities.

I don't think you can have a title or rank for lone wolves either so that might need to change.

The equipment is still a bit brief so it'd be really good if you could add more about them. Maybe how they look, what they do, how she got them, etc. I understand that the necklace is a little difficult so you're excused for that but you still ned to work on the healing bottles.

So just edit everything into the starting post, ok? Don't worry about the second one, I can delete it for you. And once you've done that, I'll edit the picture and FC in. ^^

Hey Min! I finished the last parts you wanted me to edit and its all in the first post of my profile. i changed my ability and fraction and rank. hope it all looks good. thanks for your help! =)

Ok, I've fixed everything in your first one and all you need to change is:

Ability - It's still the same one. Could you edit your very first post and change your "Personal Spells/Abilities" to show your new ability?

Pet - Not much is known about your pet, so could you maybe just add more details about it?

Equipment - Not too much to do, just add a little more information for each.

And then, we'll be that much closer to completion. ^^
Oh and I added the picture but check if it works for you. Don't forget, you don't need to make a new post, just edit your very first one. ^^

Hi Min! I finished the last little places that you wanted me to add more to. Its all in the first post of my profile. I didn't make a new post. I like the picture! Thanks! =)

I don't see an changes in the ability, Jemma. Maybe you forgot to edit that bit in? Anyway, when you can, just go ahead and put it in. Also, I think your equipment might change when you change your ability. So keep an eye on that.

But Fang's great. ^^ We'll be finished soon! ^^

Hi Min, I finished editing the abilities and equipment and changed them in my first post of Rose's profile. Hope it works! =)

The ability still isn't changed, Jemma. Just tell me what ability you want and I'll edit it in. Just remember that there's no point in having a healing ability since your fallen powers already give you the ability to heal. You could take something else though. Like maybe a water element? That way you could control water to attack, defend, etc. To an extent of course, maybe only for acertain amount of posts? It's up to you though. So just say what you want and I'll put it in. ^^

Personal Spells/Abilities:
She can make her healing bottles appear in her hand without having to carry them by saying the word of what the bottle is used to heal. Her pink teardrop necklace pendent is very valuable and she wears it around her neck. if anyone tries to take it from her, she says the word ,"NO," and the necklace glows dark pink and sends them a mile away. If her necklace glows light pink, she knows someone less dangerous comes her way even if they are far away still.

note: that is my ability min. i dont know why it hasnt shown up for u but i have been copying and pasting it there 5 times. i hope this ability is better. thanks! it has nothing to do with her healing.

Approved! ^^